"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Tuatara at Mangonui School and my teacher is Ms Lloyd
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
I loved your piece of writing Estella ... it was beautiful and peaceful - it felt like it came from within your heart ... loved the detail, especially the adjectives you used. Have you ever written any poetry ? I think you would be very good at it.
I liked how you described the tree and its leaves there are some beautiful trees around in autumn they are great for doing leaf rubbings.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great piece of writing Estella. Autumns a great month for leaves.
ReplyDeleteI loved your piece of writing Estella ... it was beautiful and peaceful - it felt like it came from within your heart ... loved the detail, especially the adjectives you used. Have you ever written any poetry ? I think you would be very good at it.
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